Hello there science bloggers,
It's us, Iuad, Arphados, Zanurak, Derp, and Charlie. We are The Science Journal and we will share with you all the things we have learned in Science over the past year. This first post is just an introduction to what we will be doing and what we will be sharing with you in the near future. Please stick with us as we share our knowledge with you about the very vast and interesting topic of Science.
The Science Journal
Hello there The Science Journal! I'm just wondering, is "The Science Journal" an appropriate name to call yourselves collectively? O.O
ReplyDeleteAnyway, here are your scores:
Content - 7/10
Coherence - 4/5
Creativity - 2/5
Voice - 4/5
Mechanics - 4/5
Text Layout - 5/5
Graphics & Multimedia - 3/5
Intellectual Honesty - 4/5
TOTAL: 33/45
The layout is perfect and the use of font, font size, color, and other technical aspects are commendable. Having said that, the introduction is too safe and I can't seem to find any element of creativity on it. I hope that you will explore more on the side of your creative writing. Hence, challenge yourselves next time as you write your second post. 'Til next time The Science Journal! o.O